All Comments on 'Gardening at Mrs Chesters'

A lovely story to introduce a new author's talent -- and a young lad to the joys of older women! Thank you and welcome to Literotica, schoolmrs; I look forward to reading more of this adventure. Five stars and Merry Christmas!

Awesome start: so many naught scenarioes looming... Please keep it going!

Hi

Thanks for sharing such an erotic story

Waiting for the next part..imagining how Mrs Chester will hold his cock innocently for the garden..how her friend will help her....there are countless kinky possibilities..

Thanks again

Neo

Looking forward to future installments.

Enjoyed your story very much. You have launched a promising career with this your first submittal. I am looking forward to finding additional chapters of this entry as well as other stories you submit.

Can't wait for the next installment!

Serious cyclists don't wear underwear under their cycling shorts - men nor women. With the proper gear and apparent level of fitness, he should know that. Otherwise, nice story.

Thanks for your comment. As you can see I am not a cyclist ! I will bear it in mind for future bike rides and make sure nothing extra is worn.

C'mon man - how many guys have to look to see if they are getting hard?

Thanks for your comment. I have to confess that I don't personally know, but then Jonathan was not at the house to be aroused, he was there to work, so may be that was the surprise?

I enjoyed the story. I am looking forward to its continuation.

I always believe that less is more. This will be a slow burn. I never like to rush things.

This was posted the same day chapter two of my story was. I had been watching this section closely and don't know how I missed this. Very enjoyable beginning.

I looked up your profile so I could write and thank you for the nice comment you left on my story, and lo and behold I see that you are writing as well. Better yet, the story is charming and I look forward to following it. Thank you for both the comment and the story,

check out part 2, via the author link

What a great start to a story. I can feel the tension building from both ends without it feeling rushed or forced. Well written, the subtleties brought out nicely. Can't wait to check out ch. 2 and more after that

It is cumming soon!!!!

I love the pace of this story. If readers are expecting a quick ending they'll be disappointed. But if you like to be teased you'll love this.

Very nice start. Good writing; plot, characters, and setting are all pretty delicious. And so is the tease. Cfnm should be its own topic section. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

Fantastic story, well written, great flow and horny as hell, hope Collett get fully involved alongside Dorothy! Can't wait to read part 2!!

Slow start, but it's got me hooked!

The first of your writings I've read, looking forward to the rest x

A trip down memory lane...I've read this superb series before but hadn't yet left a proper comment...Well,I really enjoyed that whole 'pee' conversation it was utterly naughty,is there any truth to that theory?

And then using her watch as an alternative cock ring! Mmm,I could imagine just how powerful his orgasm must of been using a woman's personal item in such a delicious way to masturbate....And my word,describing the sprouts of her hair on various parts of her body was quite arousing to hear,I can't fathom how glorious her private garden is.....

Great story please write the next part soon as I loved it

***Thanks for the read.

Well, that was an interesting start. I'll just have to keep reading. In the UK the age of consent is 16,such a shame we have to use 18 to be PC. At that age a draft would create a boner,and as a previous comment stated, we don't have to look down. lads of that age are aware of the old chap 25 hours a day.