All Comments on 'Compurape'

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hitchhkerhitchhkerabout 19 years ago
good concept

good concept , but a little too short , I'm wondering if a 2nd chapter could be possible , I know i couldn't write a part 2 . having said that 75% is not a bad score either

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Develop the characters

Good concept! Reading pleasure would be enhanced if we knew who these 2 people were before the rape! Tell us why it was so important and thrilling for this particular man to be able to rape this particular woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
mind control

i would love to control young women

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07about 16 years ago
Just right

Didn't need any more detail as it was a short story, to the point, and set the atmosphere perfectly. Thanks for a good read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Very nice

It was short, but it had a lot of detail. It also has very few typos. Overall, it's a great story.

Rifraff123Rifraff123about 11 years ago
I need a copy!

Loved the subject and the idea, well done. Sure wish such a program existed, would make family night so much more interesting!

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