All Comments on 'The Bosses Princes'

Your story's pretty good, but there are a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. For example, in the title, you mean "Boss's Princess", not "Bosses Princes." Both are real words, so they wouldn't be caught by spell-check, but they're totally incorrect.

Just thought you'd want to know. Other than that, good job.

It is rare that I read a story just to read it and enjoy the moment. I took the time with your story to simply read and enjoy... I wasn't editing I was being a fan. Thank you for that.

Always,

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