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Behind Blue Eyes

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by Anonymous

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by minsue03/27/04

So, are you going to tell me who?

You know I've no self control. Can't help but inquire. I loved this one:

Behind blue eyes is a woman
Soft and subtle, strong and bold,
Thinking of everyone but herself.

Simply lovely.

- Mindy

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by ABSTRUSE03/27/04

simply beautiful

Whoever this is dedicated to has to be the Luckiest person on earth.
You multitalented monkey.

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by Syndra Lynn03/27/04

Wow Lucky!

This is lovely. Lucky girl! It's me, isn't it? It's me I knew it. I love you too!

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by damppanties03/28/04

A beautiful dedication

A depth and sincerity of feeling packed into such few words. Amazing!

Joining the others - I want to be her.

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by Honey12303/28/04

Wonderfully sweet

What a lovely poem - just as lovely as the writer. Your words always move me, Lucky.

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by jejtrnl2504/16/04

I loved it.

I told you I couldn't pick a favorite. It wasbeautiful and sweet.

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by Colleen Thomas06/02/04

Crossing over

Crossing over from prose to verse and back again displays rare talent. You have both the lyrical ear of the poet and the descritptive prose of the storyteller. Mixed in wonderful measure. Bravo.

-Colly

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by StormyNite06/16/04

Beautiful

Whoever you wrote this about sounds like one beautiful woman, inside and out. It's a very touching poem. I loved it.

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by Lying Eyes06/24/04

Beautiful...

This special poem goes in my favorites.

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by Anonymous11/29/05

Perfect!

I loved every line of your poem. Amazing! :)

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by LeBroz01/17/07

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A wonderful love poem from one woman to her other special woman.

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by Selena_Kitt01/22/07

beautiful

just beautiful

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by Anonymous01/25/07

Articulate word selections to inspire all!

This poem deserves praise for the passion bestowed in it. It moves like a stream and sets the imagination free! I felt like I was there!

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by duddle14602/07/07

Blue eyes.

This poem will have special significance to anyone who has every loved Someone with blue eyes.

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by caringcad04/16/11

thanks

thanks are due for the idea and broad format of this peom borrowed with acknowledgement for mine. gracias.

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by Anonymous09/19/11

Ahh

Ahhhh, but I have green eyes.

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by tazz31705/15/12

THE EYES OF A BEHOLDER

dont affect her demeanor, TK U MLJ LV NV

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