by Liar
is no feeling like that " connection' and you've captured it to a "T"
thank you
Usually intermittent rhyming doesn't work and trips up the word flow.
Here you have managed to avoid the tongue stumbles with an added soupcon of alliteration.
I enjoy your tense writing but would prefer more than just a mere taste.
This poem gives the reader the barest sketch and allows a vivid picture to appear. Well worth more than 5.
Your words made me think of someone I have wanted for a long time and there has never been enough time. Your words made me smile and my heart ache, but in a wonderful way. Your poem was quite lovely.
Loved it, particularly the last line that conveys the sense of wonder so perfectly.