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"With Eyes Softly Closed..."

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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2205/18/04

A wonderful...

...a song of love. Soft and quiet, scattered with lines of beauty.

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by fawnie06/01/04

beautifully said..

"With eyes softly closed
a single tear flows
the indescribable emotion
released from within
as the eyes silently open
and find yours
looking in."
that was my favorite part..
you left me longing for this very thing.

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by Samuelx06/18/04

An awesome read.

This was an awesome read. I liked it a lot. It was great.

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by Anonymous08/21/04

It's s'wonderful, it's marvelous

Thank you for these wonderful thoughts from the heart and mind of a great lover. You are so special you're poetry makes my heart sing.

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by DanaQt10/24/04

Oustanding!

Passion!
Hot!

delicate and sweet!

Loved it :)

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by Anonymous12/07/04

in

how it should always be

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by Anonymous01/05/05

vtg interlocutor

Impressive! Interesting form. The last stanza was outstanding!

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Wonderful

This was a beautiful poem, I've writen some poems before, but you make me seem like an amature. This was truely a great poem. I'll definetly be telling everyone I know to read this! That's exactly how it should be, every single time!

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by ~hellbaby~05/02/05

Excellent

I enjoyed this very much, thanks

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by auroura909/29/05

WOW!!

I loved it!!
Yours was a truly descriptive poem describing something indescribable!!

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by odette-odile10/14/05

great moment

a beautiful emotional snapshot - you might try to increase its potency by distilling it down to fewer, but more meaningful words.

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by nightangeltears04/08/06

a delight

wonderful work of art

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by star72109/12/06

wonderful!

such feeling! and so hot!!

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by duddle14601/09/07

memory

The evocative elements of this poem make this one of remembrance. The descriptive imagery is beautiful.

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by Anonymous10/18/07

Poetry in Motion

Very sensual, well written and exciting. Good work.

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by Anonymous04/21/10

Everything as it could and should be..searched for by many..found by fewer still...
steph

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by tazz31704/28/12

WHEN ITS OVER AND HES STILL OVER

her and emitting auraes from within. TK U MLJ LV NV

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