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All Comments on 'As I Feel You Touch Me...'

by Cuntrygyrl

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Last lines in 2nd & 3rd strophe could do with a bit more work; the rhythm seems off. Otherwise, very sweet romantic piece worthy of a read.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
feelings

You have my imperial certified permission ~ to take our love further than just a kiss.

a_silent_lovea_silent_loveabout 15 years ago
Beautiful

I'm gonna read that to my boyfriend... a very beutiful piece of work. Simple words convey all emotions...

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