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by Sir_Nathan
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Anonymousalmost 20 years agosexy as hell
yes I know what I do, to my own sir ;) I love your poems Sir Nathan, really and truly
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoum, breakfast?
A most pleasant early mornig read. Kicked my sleepy imagination into overdrive. i do enjoy Your work.....enigma
AndiAndersover 19 years agoHard hitting structure
The structure of this poem lends a hard hitting drive that matches the experience being described. Very appropriate. Good choice in very short sentences, and the repetitive opening words pile momentum higher with each line.
greeneyeredheadover 19 years agoYou know
I love how your stories and this poem give life to the power that a woman feels from pleasing
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