by mcfbridge
One of the better ones!!!
I loved your casual approach to writing, and the way you took the reader along with you. You made the unbelievable, truly believable.
Congrats on winning the gold LOL ;-)
I'm glad that I chickened out of this event.
The writing was great, building the tension as the clock ticked away, and the ladies were doing their best for the competitors.
I might have liked more participants in this event so that some gained a medal and some didn't.
Perhaps the ladies should receive 'Best performance by a non-contestant' medals?
Og
This story got it all.
It has drama, suspense, sex and humor.
Truly a tale about top sport.
Great story. how did i miss this?! no matter, ive read it now and smiling the entire time. very imaginative!
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... getting into this chain. So glad I read this one! Now, I'm off to read your other one. ~Imp