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Punked Out At A Punk Show

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by Anonymous

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by woodcarverII11/04/04

Wow

Just a simple WOW is all I can manage at this time.

Wow!

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by Anonymous11/04/04

Wonderful!

This is the most erotic story I have ever read - it corresponds exactly with my wildest dream fantasy. Thank you, even though I shan't sleep tonight.

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by Anonymous11/04/04

Best I have read.

Fantastic. Most raw and erotic story on the net.

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by Anonymous11/05/04

~mmmm~

wow, talented, most certainly...i do hope to read more from this author and will be checking frequently for the name "alter boy"
~*eddy erotica~

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by Anonymous11/08/04

Hot!

Got me off!

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by Anonymous03/03/05

very hot

totally hot story, could really feel the violation!

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by Anonymous04/14/05

good shit

I'm impressed. You didn't resort to crude language, and did great with the details. Niiice story. *grin* I likey.

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by Anonymous05/02/05

Amazing

This story is HOT!

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by Anonymous05/10/05

Sad

Rather than being turned on, this story made me sad...

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by Anonymous07/11/05

A++

please come back and write some more!

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by Anonymous07/27/05

Great writing!

THis story was beautifully written. Unfortunately, a lot of submissions on this site are filled with bad grammar, poor spelling, and the blatent misuse of words. This story flowed and actually contained real emotion. Very effective. Please submit more!

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by Anonymous09/09/05

FUCKIN AWESOME!!!

PERFECT IN EVERY WAY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

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by Anonymous12/18/05

:(

This made me cry a little inside. :(

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by Anonymous01/01/06

I'm not...

into rape and non-consent. I only read this because I just read your other story, which was very hot. Despite the subject matter, I have to say, the story was hot (but sad).

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by Anonymous01/12/06

freakin hot

really liked it a lot keep it up

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by Anonymous03/17/06

Impressive

I have read a lot of non concent stories, but they always end up with the person enjoying it, submitting and wanting more.

In this case, it seems more real. The person didn't want it, didn't enjoy it and the all over reactions seem more realistic.

Sad story though. Very well writen, a lot of these stories are full of grammatical mistakes, spelling errors and so on. You didn't make any of those and you refrained from cursing.

Very well done

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by Anonymous05/08/06

Happened to me

Really good story, this happened to me, except I'm a girl, at a hard rock concert and no one ever found out it happened, but it turned me off the music forever. I was 13, but i can still relate completly. good story.

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by sharezade05/08/06

Absolutely Horrible...

but very VERY well written.

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by Anonymous05/10/06

Hate it!

I think that you can do better than write a non-consent story where it makes people die inside while reading it

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by Anonymous06/30/06

Loved It. :)

I loved it. :) Thanks for the read! I come back here often!

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by GR33NW0LF07/25/06

guilty pleasure

The story was well written though sick and twisted. it made me sick that I was getting turned on because of how erotic and descriptive your tale was

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by Anonymous08/01/06

Yum!

You sick twisted lil puppy... I love it! I expect more out of you.

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by Anonymous08/01/06

Interesting

Good writing..disturbing subject matter..could be better, could be worse..

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by Anonymous09/03/06

HOT!!

totally hot, I plan to cum back for more- pls write more stories!

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by Anonymous11/06/06

Interesting twists.

One of my favourites, the setting and trapped nature in such a public place was a really good twist. Also the struggle itself was cleverly done. Two thumbs up.

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by Anonymous04/12/07

Problem?

Well we all agree it was erotic whilst disturbing, I found it orgasmic and I can't understand people's dislike when they chose to come to the non-consent/reluctance page. You got what you clicked on didn't you? non-consent/reluctance = rape. Good story altar boy, I want more.

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by Anonymous05/31/07

hot

very hot and different

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by Anonymous06/03/07

Loved it

Very realistic. I hate when people write non-con stores but it's not really non-con, and out of nowhere the victim begins to like it. With this, the victim came extremely reluctantly and was humiliated; the feelings developed realistically and the quality of writing was excellent.

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by winktwice06/28/07

Very erotic

I was very impressed with this--very hot...

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by Anonymous07/24/07

So hot

This is by far the hottest story I've read on this site. Awesome buildup of tension, vivid scenario. Keep writing!

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by MoreRudeThanYou10/10/07

Reread and still lovin it.

I first read this story quite awhile back. I think I may have commented on it then, as well. I have to say, this is still one of my favourite stories on this site. It's so hot, and very well written.

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by Elenia2612/01/07

Your story

I am another who's read this story many times and love it. I don't know why, but Adam's humiliation turns me on, and I'm not generally into humiliation. Good work.

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by Anonymous12/27/07

Unbelievable...

Quite possibly the hottest story on the site. I hate 'noncon' that aren't, and this is. Especially the humiliation. Came all over my hand reading this. Write more like it!

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by BrazenEndeavors01/15/08

Srsly

I loved this. A person can orgasm and still hate it. They can try to pick up their lives instead of submitting to a cum-guzzling whore lifestyle. Real, and hot. Great job.

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by Anonymous01/30/08

Hot Story

I've read this story I don't know how many times and I just love it. This is one of the few nonconsent stories that I will read over and over again and return each time horny and ready. I'd love to read more.

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by Anonymous02/02/08

Great story

I had to come back and find this story again. It is one of my favorites on this site. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous02/04/08

good work

An actual nonconsent story where there is, gasp, a lack of consent. Nonconsent stories where the victim ends up inexplicably submitting and enjoying themselves are somewhere around mimes and filing taxes on my list of things I hate.

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by Anonymous04/10/08

woww

this is like gay, and it still was amazing..insane..great job man.

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by Anonymous11/18/08

Amazing.

Very well written, I've come back to read it several times. It is perfect, got me off and I was very pleased to find something where the victim did not end up enjoying it. Realistic. I will continue to return and read it again and again.

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by Anonymous03/13/09

very good

actually non-consent!
I loved it, most of these the person ends up liking it, idk I just liked this alot, one of my favorites!
keep it up =]

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by Anonymous03/14/09

Disturbing Yet....

This story was very disturbing and sad yet very well written and fit the category it was in. Keep up the good work, i felt so bad that i got alittle turned on by this, you really got me into the story.

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by little_cupcake03/15/09

surprisingly hot

I have never read a male-male story before, and the idea had never really appealed to me. But this story was so hot! I love nonconsent when it's actually nonconsentual. Well written and believable. Great job!

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Gets Me Every Time...

I've actually read this story many times since I found it, but I never realized that I hadn't left a comment. This story... is amazing. It is one of the best stories on the site. Very well-written; I love that you use words above a 1st grade reading level. I couldn't even begin to tell you how good this is. The attention to detail and how realistic the story was. The fact that it was actually NONconsent and maintained that throughout the story is admirable. I hope to see many more stories written as well from you.

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by Anonymous05/06/09

WTF???

Had he realized he liked it, this story might have been good. Poor guy, I just want to hold him!

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by Anonymous05/31/09

One of the Best of Non-Consent...

One of the few man-on-man non-consent stories that I've read - and arguably one of the best in the category. Very well-written and, well, hot. (Some people said they felt bad for being turned on by it, but I suspect the fact that both perpetrator and victim were men had something to do with it. Certainly no one bats an eyelash at such treatment of women in non-consent stories.) A refreshing vantage point and a believable story - and highly enjoyable. Kudos.

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by Anonymous06/18/09

can't believe i was so turned on

I am a married guy and boy i found this story so horny i thought it was me at first being raped then it was me doing the raping wow i masterbated so much after this story mmmm

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by Anonymous11/23/09

Broken like a Dacian Catamite!

Impressive! Very impressive indeed.

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by Anonymous10/30/10

Very Nice

sexy story

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by Anonymous04/19/11

well done.

A lot of people are rally hesitant to write legitamite rape scenes, which is dumb considering there is a whole category dedicated to it, so people obviously wanna read about it. anyways, your story really turned me on, everything about it. Idk why, don't rly want think about why, it just did. it wa actually well written as well. very very good job

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by Anonymous12/03/12

As a woman

I wish the autors of the male-female non-consent stories would follow your example and keep the 'rape' real. Outside of 'Hunted' wich is the best damn non-consent story on this site period, everyone else has the woman pating and begging for more after the first no. Your story was exceptional because it kept the rape...... a rape. Very well done.

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