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Making Of A Slut

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/18/04

A good beginning

It is a very good start! Waiting to see how it goes from here.

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by bouncytig0611/18/04

mmmmmm good start

Cant wait to read more hope he has from friends who want to help him make her more submissive

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by billie-asub11/18/04

The Lucky slut

A lovely beginning. The only fault I can find with the story is that I'm not Tina. The lucky slut.

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by Anonymous11/18/04

nice beginning

i dont normally take to this genre, but it was very well done, good work, keep it up

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by Anonymous11/19/04

About time.......

Thank god... no blonde wives with 40DD tits like most of the crap in this category! I look forward to reading more.

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by EndlessNights11/20/04

Closet sluts

This is a great story so far, nothing turns me on more then reading about a white gal who is secretly a black cock closet queen! Keep up the good work and will be watching for another installment.

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by Anonymous11/21/04

Hot story

Man oh man, this was hot. I can't wait to see Tina take it up her ass

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by Anonymous11/23/04

Hotter than hot

Man this was great. There's nothing better than seeing a rich girl acting like a slut

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by mkwn11/27/04

Good beginning

Love the story so far. Like the genre too. Wish I could find a sexy woman to be with who didnt mind taking a big cock on the side every now and again lol.

Only problem (and I hate to nitpick)...How can he stand between her legs and put his cock in her mouth? Maybe I read it wrong.

On to the second part :)

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by kdymbrowski12/01/04

Embarrassed to say.....

Embarrassed to say, but my girlfriend will love reading this one together with me. She is a blonde angel who hates video-porn but likes to read erotic stories together. This author will have my snowy angel thrashing her blonde hair in the throes of Afro-Erotica, lol.
Great story, please write more.....and do't change your style, its a little different than most, and that is totally cool.

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by Anonymous05/05/05

I CUMMED IN A BUCKET WHEN I READ THIS

THIS MADE ME CUM SO MUCH I CUMMED IN A BUCKET! YOU HAVEN'T WRITTEN IN A WHILE...I NEED MORE! IT MADE ME SO HORNY. IM GOING TO GO OUT NOW AND LOOK FOR A BLACK JANITOR TO FUCK ME. BYE!

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by Anonymous09/05/07

hot and heavy

Wow. I wonder who enjoyed the story more -- the author writing it, or me and his other readers. It feels like one big group-shared fantasy. Can't wait for the continuation.... where is it? Thanks to the author!
Molly

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by Anonymous05/26/09

A Notch Above

You haven't fallen into most of the tired cliches usually found in this particular genre. You do address superior size, but it isn't emphasized ad nauseum. You also manage to combine the interracial experience with some non consent to appeal to those who like both, and you did it with strength, but didn't go over the top. The bit about sucking black cock in college when she "was drunk" also added a measure of credibility. Nice Touch! Keep up the good work.

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by shiann01/03/14

going black

wow this is getting very interesting

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