All Comments on 'Edges Ch. 02'

by WantonWench

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duckiesmutduckiesmutover 19 years ago
***

This is just...stunning...

'You are held in my bonds and I am held by your soul in my hands.'

i love that You've ended Your story in this way.

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanover 19 years ago
Smiles

VERY well written.

SN

SensualCurvesSensualCurvesabout 19 years ago
Wonderful!

Wonderful story....My boy and I have such a love as this...indeed W/we are soulmates...What a joy to read - Thank you so much

SC

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oh Gosh

What a beautiful hot erotic session that was. You know how to grab the reader's attention. I love the way you build up that scene and the passionate way you describe it. Made me incredible hard.

Wonderful

FaithfulNymphoFaithfulNymphoover 15 years ago
Wow

I am in awe. Beautiful, eloquent, delicious...there simply aren't words. Please don't stop writing!

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