Love it but the finale was a little disappointing, because after taking him through all that denial of cumming, at least his first cum should have been in her pussy. It was kind of strange to me to have written 6 whole chapters of her teasing him on the so-called strange vacation not letting him cum. Taking him to the beach, exposing him to various build up to frustrate his hard ons and then waste that sperm like spitting on the sidewalk on a rainy day. To me it was gross, wonder what other reades think. It was like throwing prime baby making sperm onto the side walk for the sun to dry like road kill on the highway or in the toilet to be flush into the a polluted river for the fish or crabs to drink. This was a somewhat wasted finale, at least she didn't produce a dildo and stick in in his ass and massage his prostate to make him to cum. That in itself was a dedeeming value, he came away with his manhood intact, because this reader have read many stories on literotica takng reader where you took them a the wife, girl friend or significant other would produce that reliable dildo from some where and give him that cum he was craving for and do it in one chapter
Well written, yet not my type of story. Way too one sided a relationship, and nothing like a real marriage. All mind games using arousal and denial.
Loved the ending... after all the teasing and delay... when she finally took him to orgasm... it was totally for him, and, like she promised, the best he'd ever experienced!
enjoying your stories very much. I keep checking in for your latest work - are you working on anything at the moment.
Keep up the good work
Peter, we have not heard much from you for a couple of years. Its about time you added to your Peter and Lisa collection!
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