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Damn
Damn, that was good. Story was good. The pictures were even better. Thanks.
VERY WELL DONE
IT IS GOOD THAT YOU HAVE A RESOURCE FOR PICTURES TO ADD TO YOUR STORY. I THINK IT IS A GREAT ASSET TO ANY STORY TO HAVE ILLUSTRATIONS TO ENHANCE THE WORDS OF A STORY.
VERY GOOD JOB, KEEP THEM COMING.
wow
very sexy story..i loved it
mmmmmmmmm
The pictures were the best part of the story.
mmmmmmmmm
The pictures were the best part of the story.
Pictuire Perfect
The story was the best part of the picture!
MORE!
Lets have more. Surely you're not going to stop here. Let us know what happens at the strip club.
good
on't know nothing about poems but the woman is fucking fantastic! She got a 5 from me!!
well matched~
never seen an illustrated piece where the story and the pictures went hand in hand so well. they were both wonderful keep it up...
WOW
They say picture is worth a thousand words. This story rates well over 6 thousand....and counting.
Good story with pics to match
Hot pics, a relatively hot girl and a decently written story.
Lap it up folks.
HOT story...HOT pics!
excellent on all accounts! both story and pics were great. keep it up!
hot
don't know what i liked best the story or the pics....both were awesome!!
sizzlin'
I am infatuated and a few other words I am unsure of there meaning but sound good right now like chuckleboned wow, now that's illustrated erotic tail I meant tale !
=)
i can def see why you said this story was doing well!
FUCKING HOTT DARLING! =D
loved the story ANDt he pics (have to admit, the pics ewre EXTREMELY distracting from focusing on teh words! lol)... especially teh ones with teh chains =D soooo hott!
*HUGS*
smokin'
great story and hot pics to match! tell us more!!
I'd like to give you a higher score...
...but the thermometer doesn't go any higher. The story and pictures are so hot, they should break the thermometer. I am really looking forward to the trip to the strip club. Will it be illustrated as well?
Kisses, Bill Dada
Steamy...
great work, both with the story and the pics!
I needed that
Thanks for a great orgasm! You kept my pussy aching.
storie
Grat work only wish it could have been longer, nice llokig lady.
Amazing...
Just the Images ALONE make me smile... thank you for the combination of words and the flash of a smile... a cheeky smile...
Awesome
OMG! That was hot. . .I look forward to reading more from you soon.
Great Pictures
Really enjoyed your pictures. Please write more stories with plenty of pictures of yourself, hopefully nude!
Thanks
very HOTTTTT
She is very hot you to see more of her
Best red head ive ever seen!!
she has smooth legs and nice body and looks great in garter please more of her.
overrated
you are all about you arent you?
More Like Over Heated
Great story until I got to the picturers. Lost my place and spent a long time just enjoying the sights. Hope there are more stories and photos in the works.
you aint all that!!!
wow, what an ego!!! if your looks matched your overrated opinion of yourself, we might have something!!! get a life! this site is for real writers, not hacks with boobs who use it as an excuse to show off.
Over rated? Not to me.
The photos and story tell me there is a very sexy woman some place in the world that I wish I could meet just once.
wow
im typing in between strokes right now. this is one stimulating story. my cock thanks you
im horny tonite after reading this
I love women getting with women its so fkn sexy and im bisexual too and I can't wait til the next time I get to taste the sweet juices from another woman's pussy...yummy;)
hot
wow this was hot im a girl and im bi now
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