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Quote:

Your touch

on my face

my neck

my breasts

my back

my ass

I like this, but I probably would've eliminated some words like the, my and me.

Your touch on my face,

neck, back, breasts

and ass

Quote:

Holding me

Desiring me

Possessing me

Holding, desiring

and possessing me

Just a little too much repetition for me. But a pleasure to read. Thank you.

I really enjoyed this dear. It is simply wonderful. I believe you caught the moment you wanted to express well. Congrats. I liked the way you structured the poem. It gave it a bit more attitude I think. I really like the way that you ended it as well. I hope you find what you're looking for. I'm in your corner for sure.

Take care,

Ashley

way to go gurl. it's wonderful,smiles

I WOULD HAVE LIKED IT EVEN MORE IF SOME OF THE ME AND AND S WERE LEFT OUT JUST LET IT FLOW. GOOD JOB.