All Comments on 'While You Were Sleeping'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Sweet...

deep...beautiful....and straight from a mother's heart!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
touching write

and you say you can't do poetry

well what do you call this?

I call it wonderful words of as poem <grin>

We2andmaybeUWe2andmaybeUabout 19 years ago
such a beauty...

your words are heartfelt touching and beautiful through and through....LOVELY POEM!

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
A touching piece...

about stopping to appreciate the simple moments of life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
great

beautiful and sweet a great capture of the innocence of a child... lovely

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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