All Comments on 'No Football'

by techsan

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
OK Story

Not much drama or any emotions really. Kind of bland, you need to work on the story in the story more.

ProfessorRProfessorRalmost 18 years ago
Some good points

I haven't noticed any need for special technology to block men's minds during football broadcasts. And their women are especially eager to prove that. That is a funny idea, but you do need to work on this story otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good idea.

I agree with the other posters. Good idea and decent story. But it needs a little work to spice it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Lacking

While it was marginally entertaining,there is no true spice to the story. Where did this technology/ability come from, and what exactly is the technology/ability. Is it merely mental blocks, or is it in fact like computers. To qoute any of my english teachers, rewrite, revise, and resubmit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
oh really?

one of the more ridiculous ones I've read.

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