by techsan
Not much drama or any emotions really. Kind of bland, you need to work on the story in the story more.
I haven't noticed any need for special technology to block men's minds during football broadcasts. And their women are especially eager to prove that. That is a funny idea, but you do need to work on this story otherwise.
I agree with the other posters. Good idea and decent story. But it needs a little work to spice it up.
While it was marginally entertaining,there is no true spice to the story. Where did this technology/ability come from, and what exactly is the technology/ability. Is it merely mental blocks, or is it in fact like computers. To qoute any of my english teachers, rewrite, revise, and resubmit