All Comments on 'A Shopping Trip Gone Right Ch. 03'

by BrettJ

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Landrious1Landrious1over 18 years ago
Chapter 4 should be a knock out!

Very good story! Very upbeat. I hope you keep it that way and don't turn it into a major downer. Kim and her hubby could have some real freaky fun times if they talk to one another about bringing fantasies to life. Very well written and I hope we see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A Shopping Trip...getting better all the time!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Kim, Keith and Carly...and maybe even Samantha getting in on the action. Hurry up with the next chapter, please

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