All Comments on 'And Three Makes Company'

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 18 years ago
Just right!

Just the right amount of romance instead of a straight fuck fest. Very well done!!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
tootsie roll

"Now it's my turn to get to the tootsie roll center…"

Your charming tale prevail, I enjoyed this for the romance that you protrait in a tantalizing tale. <grin> nice write

Cousin-BarbCousin-Barbover 18 years ago
Good Story but a bit confusing

Writer should have added a 100 or so more words so that everyone could understan who was doing what and to whom and the story would have been much better

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
A good start

This story needed a little more romance, to include a true gift giving that would have resulted in a 9-month stretch of a growing belly, and at least 18 years of baby-sitting and all the activities that go with childhood, adolescence, and young adulthood.

don-donna2don-donna2about 18 years ago
Ignore the Jerkoff----A nice story of a common ...

....fantasy of many married. Male and Female

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