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And Three Makes Company

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by Anonymous

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by Azuldrgon10/03/05

Just right!

Just the right amount of romance instead of a straight fuck fest. Very well done!!

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by My Erotic Tale10/21/05

tootsie roll

"Now it's my turn to get to the tootsie roll center…"

Your charming tale prevail, I enjoyed this for the romance that you protrait in a tantalizing tale. nice write

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by Cousin-Barb12/31/05

Good Story but a bit confusing

Writer should have added a 100 or so more words so that everyone could understan who was doing what and to whom and the story would have been much better

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by don8765412/31/05

A good start

This story needed a little more romance, to include a true gift giving that would have resulted in a 9-month stretch of a growing belly, and at least 18 years of baby-sitting and all the activities that go with childhood, adolescence, and young adulthood.

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by don-donna201/27/06

Ignore the Jerkoff----A nice story of a common ...

....fantasy of many married. Male and Female

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