All Comments on 'Hybrid Theory'

It was good and i do hope to see a sequel to it

Please continue the story!!!

Your story was enjoyable and entertaining and I would enjoy a sequal that continues the story and explaines possible problems for her either having a hybrid mate or becoming one herself and who she was before they met. But it was good and please continue to write even if you don't continue this story.

~Cromm

I just loved this story...I would love to hear more and to see what Molly decides...

smarmy and romantic and good about love. It touched me deeply. I hope you do write a sequel and soon. You are a fantastic author.

great story and by all means continue it, please!

Hey This was great. Cant wait to read more!!!!!

I love werewolf stories and everyone seems to have their own view. This is one of my new Favs.

this was a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please tell us you plan to write the sequel(s).

This story was worth reading, but maybe should have been longer. Someone looking for hard core sex might not like it because it's a bit sweet. But, I liked it alot and am going to read the other stories by this author.

loved it, especially that they could read each others thoughts thats a new one, i think it was a perfect blend of sensual sex with love and tenderness, my kind of story keep writing, want more on this couple:)

I loved it! Werewolves are very sexy (in my opinion). This story is about a hero who found his one true love...I can't wait to read the next chapter!

A Truely Lovely Story. I hope you write many more chapters.

I thought Leland needed to be a bit developed more. He arrived all to conveniently and there's no background on why he might have been around Molly.

But I am interested in finding out Molly's decision.

thanks so much for this story.

leland is the perfect mix of sex, innocence and animal magnetism.

i really enjoyed it.

I just found this story and wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Please continue with it.

different things turn different people on but I loved this

you are realy good at this. keep going at it!

=^.^=

I enjoyed the story. I kinda wish molly talked more and it was a bit longer. Keep on writing! =)

I love the detail you give to the love making, one line that stood out to me was:

'Molly's breasts bounced enticingly, her cries filling Leland's ears like sweet music. He brought his lips to hers with bruising force, one of her hands gliding up to tangle her fingers in his wavy locks of hair.'

This is a good example of the detail I mean. Men notice things like bouncing breasts during sex. Usually with female authors, much time isn't spent considering what the opposite sex would be seeing and feeling. You seem to have a good grasp of that. Keep up the writing! You are a beautiful woman with a talent for literature.

As a request, I'd love to see you write a story or two in first person narrative. For example: "I went to the store and you were there." As opposed to "Molly went to the store and Leland was there."

I'm sure that this didn't quite turn out as you thought it in your head. It kind of read like stereo instructions. Best of luck on future writings.

wonderful story. i think it could use just a little more detail in plot line, but what was there was masterfully written. i would love for you to continue the storyline!

please add more to this story...cant wait to read more of your work

haha, that sounds like me.

This is a great story I hope you come back and finish it.

Never stop writing. I truly enjoyed the story.