All Comments on 'Vertical Blinds'

Very good with audio a nice complement to the written word.

The music was rather subdued until that first "striped fragment of sky." That made my eyes wide. :)

After listening to the audio, I had to take a quite moment to read the poem. The words alone are very good.

Nice work. I'm not usually fond of repetition in poetry, but I really enjoyed it in this poem. Thanks for sharing and keep writing! :)

Turning the lights out and playing this on Media Player with the "light show" effects puts me back in the 60s.

In a good way.

Now where are my Jefferson Airplane albums?

I'll never look at my verticals in the same old way again....

j'aime les femmes