by king_wesley
Interesting so far. The elements of a good mind control story introduction are there, but we'll have to wait to see if the remainder delivers. Keep up the good work.
it's looking good so far; taking your time, building it up...groundwork is always necessary. don't let any negative barbs deter you.
Story's approach to your erotic part of your story is fairly original.
To be in another country and turned into a slut for the men there! Every girls fantasy!
Well at least it is this girls fantasy!
Kisses,Wendy