All Comments on 'Daddy and Little One Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
you are such a tease

i have been following this story and cant wait for the next chapter. i hope that daddy and little one will finally do the deed but i fear that you will continue to tantalize the readers. either way this is still a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Just Gets Better And Better

The lack of names, only titles, makes it easier to keep up with the characters. The still undetermined age

is very exciting and interesting. The reader can make up his or her own mind, I like that. I voted this and

other chapters 100%. The length of each chapter and the suspense at the end is just right. Do continue

and don't change a thing about your characters, they are nice people and I find their thoughts to be much

as I would think anyone in a simular situation would be. Again, very nice and exciting. Richar

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
Very...

good...well written and i really like this story and how well you've put it together and keep the chapters coming quickly...i hate waiting for months for a story to be finished or one little chapter at a time over months and months...lots of life in this story to go...can't wait to see where you go with it*smile*...respectfully fan in Texas naynay

playfulgirl2001playfulgirl2001almost 18 years ago
very hotttttttttttttttttt

oh goddddddd....very very hottttttttttttttttttttt...cant wait for chapter 10..giggles

patti

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
tease, tease, tease...

I can't wait till the next chapter...I'm already wet with anticipation!! I love your stories, please keep them comming quickly. The only suspence I want to experience is them actually doing the deed, not waiting for a chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Amazing

This story is wonderful. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
please more

I Love this story so much its so hot! please please write more i cant wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Please

Pleas Update soon!! I absolutely love your story and keep checking every day to see if you've updated yet. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Mmmm

I want more :)

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