All Comments on 'The Hitch Hiker: Elise'

just your style

Way to go bobie - a twofer or wimps to go - or wimps r u.

I'm almost out of zeroes today. Have to check out your other stuff another day.Oh, read your message. Lots of shit going on in your life. Maybe you inspired all these slut/whores ect just by your mear presence.

OK, your message worked. I feel bad about all the zeroes. I think you can now look forward to a sympathy "25".

Was funny!

That made no sense. And if he hated it so much, why did her husband show up to fuck her? I'm not sure who was crazier - the husband, the wife or the trucker?

Heck -- you got a "5" from me & you deserved every bit of it coming up with a story like this one.!*** lol

Kinda cute but now a days stuff like this happens more than we think but just never happens to me on the road.! Keep on a writing.*^^

I gave it ****. It would have been a *****, but there's no explanation why she was using the pay phone when she had a cell phone all along.

Silly, but intriguing. Wonder how her husband responds when he finds he's gotten every truck stop venereal disease known to medicine?

I know, its just fiction. In this case, science fiction.

Wife sharing is never something that you just jump into. Sometimes one partner or the other can’t handle it. That’s why you start small and work up to it all the while talking a lot to makes sure everyone is on the same page. Great story about being careful what you wish for. A 4* rating, and a favorite.

When she gives him aids or herpes he won't be happy. Badly thought out drivel Bob.

At least this cuck and his whore make a little money from her habit.

The last line is great! Five stars. ~~ JB Edwards

PS: I read your open letter. More power to you! That's quite a life you've led, so far.