All Comments on 'Daddy'

Give you 25 for the lead in.

A little unrealistic to jump from reading a child's book to "ramming" his cock into his daughter's tight little pussy.

You need to take a little longer, add in some foreplay, some conversation....especially for a "first time" encounter with a daughter!

Any story about a father fucking his daughter the summer before she goes off to college is a good story. He fucked her pussy and then he gave her his cum in her mouth. That's good too. You gave me an erection and that's good.

Well stated off well then bam bam. These stories need to be realistic first and need a slow build up, foreplay, seduction etc to be real. Society teaches everyone that father daughter incest is wrong so it usually takes quite a bit to get over that in peoples heads. With that you need a battle of morality to go on , foreplay, seduction, and a buildup. Check browneyedgrrl story line to see a real good daddy daughter story for some hints :)

Flyguycal

Enjoyed the story. Hope you are going to continue with the idea, especially since she is off to college. She has a lot of potential. Keep up the good work

I really got erect at the lead in. You got me going at first then they just went at it like two randy teens. I expected more out of this from the beginning of the story. C'mon, the father is not a wet-behind-the-ears junior high school kid; he's an adult, let him seduce her like one

Could have lasted longer. Sorry. You have the talent. Keep writing, but make it believeable, please. I beg of you!

oooh! that is sooo fucking hot!!!!

your writing is amazing-it had me finger fucking myself to multiple orgasms-

As it should be...how could a dad refuse his loving daughter...