All Comments on 'By The Fire'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not to bad

The sex scene could have lasted just a little bit longer. BUT the story in itself was pretty cool to read. Definatly should do another one later on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Disappointed no current stories

Well written story and nice length. It seems many of the recent (2011) stories are much longer and don't say nearly as much as this story. Wish Author was adding stories to this website.

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