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Garage Gang Rape

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/19/06

You would have us believe

That such a thing could happen. Not to mention that a simple call to police would simply solve the problem..You use a setup up ridiculous situation to set the stage for your rape...Where do people like you get your fukin brains...Oh you don't have any...I knew that already...Stop trying to write NOW

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by Anonymous06/19/06

Well actually,

I thought that was pretty good for a first attempt at writing. It was descriptive and yet could do with more detail to flesh it out more. Few grammatical errors which is a relief. Clearly being treated like a slut is the core element and thats just fine by me. Well done, Slut4Use.

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by SexSweetheart06/19/06

Can't Wait

Hello,

This was enjoyable why of paying for car repairs. I wouldn't listen to anyone telling you not to continue this story. My big question is, how many payments does she have to make?

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by Anonymous06/19/06

How about a tazer (spelling) One end in his ------

----dickey the other in his shithole as the trigger is pulled

Love to read about that

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by Anonymous06/19/06

Dirty slut - Wonderful

Great story, please write another episode, any chace of turning her into a gang bang slut who lets other guys use her.
How about letting the "Bin Men" fuck her for their Christmas Bonuses.

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by myoteam06/19/06

very hot fantasy

I thought the story was very well written and was a sexual turn on to read. What some people need to understand is that it is a FANTASY!! Something that the author thought would appeal to some people. If you aren't the kind of person that can enjoy reading something like this and enjoying the picture she paints of a woman in the middle of a bunch of black guys then don't read it. Not like the tittle tried to trick you...it said what it is. Great job on the story and please write more.

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by Anonymous06/19/06

WOW WHAT A STORY

PLZ WRITE A NEXT PART OF UR STORY ITS REALLLY SO HOT STORY

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by 06/19/06

Your story was

mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout

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by Anonymous06/20/06

Go For It

Good fantasy story. I say "Go 4 It" and write another chapter or two.

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by fukensploogin06/21/06

that was fun

Gotta love it when it's all intense and rough! Keep on writing! Surely, word's gotta get around to their buddies about this slut who can really take a fucking.

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by Anonymous06/21/06

From Slut4Use - Author

Thanks to everyone who has commented on my story. Having some problems with writing account at the moment but will submit again soon.

To Anonymous USA - as someone else here has pointed out, the title did not try to fool anybody - it told you what this story is. It is a FANTASY - my FANTASY. If you think you could write better please go ahead - oh and reveal your identity too - don't be chicken!

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by ldlarry5206/24/06

Predicable

Good predicable wanking story. Nice to read a female written rape fantasy. Glad you used the wrote ass when you wrote about how they raped your ass. Would certainly like to read more of your fantasies. As for anonymous negative comments, these folks are gutless assholes that probally never write anything themselves. I wish Literotica would eliminate the anonymous comment, our user names aready give us anonymity. Or at least deney voting priviledges to these ass holes..

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by Anonymous06/25/06

PrimaDonna in the making

It was an okay story until I saw the author drew her claws. Definitely sounded like a Prima Donna. So anonymous who dislike your stories were chickens while anonymous who said your story was good were not chickens because they stroke your ego.?

It was obviously your story must have hit a nerve with certain readers who don't like your style or plot that was why they left a less favorable review and you had to get into a hissy fit.

Well acclaimed authors around the world who received bad criticism don't even act like you do and you are just a novice. Maybe you should start reading "Guide for Amateur Writers of Erotica by bs904@freenet.carleton.ca" especially under the paragraph heading 'Criticism'.

Oh by the way I'm one of the anonymous poster too. Whether the story was good or bad I will still review under anon.

I would have rated you a 75 for okay writing but your attitude left a bitter taste in my mouth so a 25 should be more appropriate.

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by uvlas4506/30/06

watch my ass, I may love it

I have loved it dear, it was interesting, hot and well written. My little master also showed interest. Keep it up. I love to read about the next payments.

Love uvlas.

PS. Can you edit one of my stories.

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by Anonymous08/26/07

hot

as someone who has tried to write and admits failure, i LOVED your story. really good fantasy. incredibly hot. it normally takes a couple of stories for me to cum. yours did it alone. well done.

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by Anonymous09/15/07

Wow

Hi, what a fantastic story, the fact that you could fit two cocks in your pussy is incredible. I would love to read more stories especially if they involved panties also. Now that would be sensational. You have such a dirty mind and it should be saluted.

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by Anonymous10/08/07

Loved it!

And even if I hadn't, I'd think it was stupid for someone who enjoyed the story to rate low because they don't like something about the author. That's just childish. Just as divas are appreciated for their talent, and not their demeanor, this author should be rated solely on her writing.

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by Anonymous09/28/08

Good except for some grammar

It was a good story but had some grammar errors in it. Other than that I liked it.

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by Anonymous12/05/08

mmm

i love monster cocks 'cause they strech my holes the way I like it...Fantasy or reality...I enjoyed the story very much!

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by Anonymous07/10/09

Ooo wow.

Delicously scary and painful. I LOVED IT! I kept twinging and half-whimpering when she went thru an especially painful part. 100% Hot!

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by Anonymous07/13/09

Great

Loved it, it was one of the best

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by Anonymous07/17/09

ggr

should be illustated

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by brandane10/23/09

garage rape

just wish i was a mechanic

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by scapewheel01/09/10

loved your story

Great story...can't wait for the next installment. Love to read about white girls becoming addicted to big black cocks and unable to enjoy our small, white pee-pees anymore.

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by forfun4401/15/10

Very Hot!!

Every woman should experience a good Gang-Bang, it may help loosening up some sexual Taboos...

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by Anonymous01/27/10

Very exciting!!

I really liked your story and can not wait to read the next one!!

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by Anonymous07/15/10

AMAZING

loved it!! please please write another one!

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by Anonymous07/22/10

get your friend involved in the next. she is jealous of your story and wants to help you pay. so hard right now. off to screw my gf.

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by Anonymous08/22/10

Mmm

I am in college to be an English Major, I love reading stories, writing them and editing them. I think this is one of the best gang bang stories I have read. And I happen to read a lot of them. :) Please keep up the good work.

Kira

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by Anonymous12/13/10

Made me want to go get my car fixed and not be able to pay for it. Mmm, a good gang banging sounds like so much fun. Damn, I'm hot now!

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by Gaston101/07/11

They raped me

Pretty good story. Will like reading more from you.

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by sassysasha8904/23/11

Vote yes

Let's see the rest of the installments.

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by Anonymous08/29/11

more

would luv to here about your next payment, that was hot

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by Anonymous09/24/11

Love It!

I masturbated twice read this!! Awesome! I wanna FUCK YOU! Literotica, you rock! \m/ . Next installment please!

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by cpig10/04/11

More please!

Excellent story.

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by Anonymous10/21/11

You have some classy admirers . . .

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by barry9712/17/11

It is Fantasy:

Hay it is a fantasy. Like a lot of murder mysteries on tv etc. I liked reading it. There is Science Fiction on TV. Lots of books that are fantasies. So those who thought it was real wake up and smell the coffee.

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by Anonymous12/29/11

Fantastic

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by Anonymous01/28/12

Disapointed

I thought I was going to read a good rape story. I cant stand tales wheer the girl starts to get into the rape

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by SomberRose08/16/12

Eh....

The dialog was a little cheesy at times & the story didn't have any build-up to it.

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by Anonymous10/17/12

Good

I thought it was a good stOry. The climax was ver well written.

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by Anonymous11/17/12

seeking a stranger dick

I wish that someone could fuck my wet pussy. Haven't had a dick in 7 years so hot and wet.

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by Anonymous12/05/12

I definitely want this story to continue.

Maybe this time she goes to them. She could get taken in the main garage area, maybe little BDSM.... Just reading this story made me cum so har, imagining all those monster cocks stuffed into my wet pussy and ass.

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by Anonymous05/12/13

It was alright...

But so cliché. What's up with the white cock thing? White guys can have big cocks too. Why must white females try to emasculate and humiliate white men?

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by Anonymous08/10/13

almost awesome

i know it almost a rule, but i think the mouth rape is always a little too much while one is getting a full ride below at the same time. like which end is one supposed be enjoying. i would like to see more titty sucking and biting while getting raped by a big black guy while another one is holding her down. but that's just me. there are different positions too. :-)

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by Anonymous10/02/13

I just had a cock yesterday!! :):):):):)

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by Anonymous11/02/13

Worked for me

Great story - loads of hard fucking and she loves it. So when do we get the next instalment? What does she do about getting DPed again now she has a taste for it? Does she tell her friend Lisa and take her along for company next time? If Lisa visits the garage with her, make sure the cock to hole ratio stays the same - get some more guys in.

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by Anonymous03/18/14

Excellent storytelling

Loved the story. I'm a white guy that has become addicted to interracial porn and erotica. So this is truly right up my alley. I can't wait for the next installment. Don't pay attention to the negative comments. I love how Claire realizes that she can never be satisfied by white guys again. The sexiest thing a woman can ever say, is black men fuck better. Just my opinion. But if I were married, that's what I'd want to hear my say.

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by Anonymous04/30/14

Boring

@Anon 03/18/2014 - Lol, please, you're not a White guy. You're most likely a Black pretending to feed your own unfounded ego.

The story was okay, but it loses it value when they start enjoying the rape.

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by tonguelasher0105/20/14

Anon "Boring"

The problem is that this site (inconsistently) bans stories where it is not clear that she is enjoying the rape. That's why I stopped writing for them - they are hypocrites, and it is too bad.

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