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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
You asked for it

I did not find this story as well written as the authors prvious efforts. Her ability to portray BDSM while interesting is not up to her terrific descriptions of the gentler aspects of fucking, oral sex and masturbation. She would be well advised to stick to those themes

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I love a good mind fuck. That is what erotica is to me. Hopefully, I will improve my skills and turn a few people on. If you ever have any suggestions on how I can grow as a writer, drop me a line.