All Comments on 'The Perfect Job Ch. 02'

Chapter 2 is much better than Chapter 1. Michelle's attitude went from "trying to find a piece of meat" to trying to create a relationship. She still has a long way to go, but she is becoming a more attractive woman.

Nookiehunter

This is getting better and beter, please hurry with more!

Continues the tone set by Part I

but does not quite match its standard

For something that you say has been edited, there are still way too many mistakes: "tiled" instead of "tilted" for example.

The story is pretty good, but the proof-reading leaves a lot to be desired.