by chesterfeildsofa
Actually, I feel that it read very realistically. As usual, I suspect the negative comments are from those who do not like 'nonconsent' stories. The question one always ends up asking is, "Why do they bother clicking on the NONCONSENT option?"
Point in case, the reader who claimed this was, "unreal" states she gives the teacher a blowjob when, in fact, she does not. He jerks off and sprays her with copious amounts of sperm.. thus she is humilated, but unpenetrated.
I say, ignore the idiots and Welcome to LitErotica. I look forward to more writings from you. Do not be discouraged. The only fault I found was that you did not give any sort of physical description. I have no idea what either of them look like! :)
~ Kaila
OOOOOOOhh!!!....Daddy & I LOVE stories like this one! Will be looking for more of YOUR (omg!) stories in the near future? thank you! OXOXOXOX