by mjm202036
Excellent story it is short but lays a fine ground work for the future stories
I LOVE this series. You're a great writer and I hope to see you also experiment with some other series or types of stories as well.
Haha, I don't know if anyone else noticed or if it was supposed to say this but in ninth paragraph on the second line when it describes her finger nails it says bitch black instead of pitch black. Haha, anyway very story I'm gonna read the next one now.
Promising beginning of 'be careful what you wish for' story. So far just a glimpse or introduction. Hopefully it'll get deeper as the story develops.
Who knows, maybe it was SUPPOSED to be "bitch black". It would be a rather interesting color!
And to the author, wonderful story thus far.