All Comments on 'Lustful Summoning Ch. 01'

by mjm202036

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Demonically inticing story it pulls you in

Excellent story it is short but lays a fine ground work for the future stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A great start to a great series

I LOVE this series. You're a great writer and I hope to see you also experiment with some other series or types of stories as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
WOW

This is one intense story! Well Done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Funny typo

Haha, I don't know if anyone else noticed or if it was supposed to say this but in ninth paragraph on the second line when it describes her finger nails it says bitch black instead of pitch black. Haha, anyway very story I'm gonna read the next one now.

Dry_opinionDry_opinionabout 12 years ago
Promising beginning

Promising beginning of 'be careful what you wish for' story. So far just a glimpse or introduction. Hopefully it'll get deeper as the story develops.

agamotto1313agamotto1313about 5 years ago
Anonymous 4/5/11

Who knows, maybe it was SUPPOSED to be "bitch black". It would be a rather interesting color!

And to the author, wonderful story thus far.

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