by Zenythmon
Story is ver good-hope you will write more.--jackinscottdale@webtv.net
HOT and Heavy with some astonishing details!! It sure might
be interesting too, to read Chapter Two...pregnant and filled with baby alien???
This was so hot- the combination of tentacle/alien sex made me feel all tingly inside. A sequel please!
made me so wett! all those holes being filled and a more than through fucking, mmmmmmm....
Great description and story telling and I love the writing in the first person. I developed a great visual of the scene as I read it. Got me very excited. Nice job!
Great writing! I hope she decides to stay and enjoy herself...
This story is a great example of tentacle sex. Very satisfying!