You've done really well in capturing the female viewpoint, I relly admire you even trying as it's difficult to write from the opposite sex's side of things. I'm really looking forward to reading more!
I giggled all the way through that, thanks so much!
you write well, this was fun to read
Let me echo another comment. This story was fun to read. It contains a coincidence - rooming with X in college - that seems odd. Most schools try to have new roomates meet...
But that's what drives THIS story, so it's necessary.
Remarkable. You are one of those on Lit to watch.
You've captured the female POV and context rather neatly. I'll be interested to see where you go with this one. Good luck.
Very nice, Joe-- very sensitive, sweet, and I simply adore waffling characters like Tina. Her language seems spot-on to me-- current and just idiosyncratic enough.
That's a very clever way to have them meet- so anti-cliche. I have a feeling that the next chapters are going to be a great pleasure to read!
Where'd you do your research? Is there something you're not telling us? Nice light touch. Looks like it'll be a fun ride. Well done, Joe.
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