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The Hardest Kind To Be Ch. 01

byJoe Wordsworth©
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by English Lady10/22/07

Sweet and realistic.

You've done really well in capturing the female viewpoint, I relly admire you even trying as it's difficult to write from the opposite sex's side of things. I'm really looking forward to reading more!

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by Anonymous10/22/07

Brilliant

I giggled all the way through that, thanks so much!

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by Anonymous10/23/07

Funny

you write well, this was fun to read

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by Anonymous10/23/07

Fun to Read

Let me echo another comment. This story was fun to read. It contains a coincidence - rooming with X in college - that seems odd. Most schools try to have new roomates meet...

But that's what drives THIS story, so it's necessary.

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by Caitano10/24/07

Impressive writing, Joe

Remarkable. You are one of those on Lit to watch.

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by TE99910/24/07

Well done Joe

You've captured the female POV and context rather neatly. I'll be interested to see where you go with this one. Good luck.

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by Stella_Omega10/25/07

Well done!

Very nice, Joe-- very sensitive, sweet, and I simply adore waffling characters like Tina. Her language seems spot-on to me-- current and just idiosyncratic enough.
That's a very clever way to have them meet- so anti-cliche. I have a feeling that the next chapters are going to be a great pleasure to read!

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by jomar10/25/07

Seemed believable to me.

Where'd you do your research? Is there something you're not telling us? Nice light touch. Looks like it'll be a fun ride. Well done, Joe.

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