All Comments on 'I Thought I Hated Him Ch. 10'

*sigh* You left me smiling and sighing. What a lovely story.

You're not the only one who fell in love with these characters...I did not want this story to end, though I wanted to hit her over the head when she reacted so badly to his first marriage proposal. You wrote wonderful characters, thank you for the gift on this Sunday morning. Please don't take too long to write your next story.

You just needed the confidence in yourself to let what's inside you flow. This story was wonderful and I think, if you'll think about it, you'll realize you could send it in to a publisher. Come on, girl, you will be great!

This story was great...thank you for writing the last three installments so quickly. You are great!

Now...I would love to see what happens with our friend Lily...

beginning to end. Absolutely superb writing and characters. Will be on the lookout for more of your work in the future.

Beautiful intense story. Enjoyed it from start to end.

I have read all of your stories so far, I would love for you to finish "Not my type". Please keep writing you have such talent!

what a wonderful ending, maybe you could put in a little epilogue nine months later with a little bundle of joy and a much more successful business, i just don't want it to end.

i have enjoyed reading this story so much i can't wait for you to finish not my type and writers block.

I'm so happy yet sad. I am happy that things have worked out so well for these two characters. Yet I'm sad because I don't want this to be the end of this wonderful story.

I have enjoyed reading every section posted.

I look forward to reading more stories from you. Your stories touch the heart of the reader.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

It's really good to read a story of more or less "normal" people who work through their problems to a satisfying ending.

Firstkiss, this has been such a wonderful series. I am so happy it ended well. You are an amazing writer.

Thank you!

You are my favorite writer on this site. Keep up the good work. All your stories leave me wanting more. Please continue with them as you have with this series!

this is everything a love story should be... please finish "not her type" or start something else. i'll read anything from you!

This story was amazing and I truly enjoyed every chapter of it. Thank you so much for this story.

What a wonderful ending, although it would have been fun to have a little poke at ol' what's his name. I especially love how both of these characters developed and grew. Fab job.

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your stories. Please keep it up.

Your story left me smiling. Thank you.

A perfect ending! Thank you for a wonderful story!

I have followed this story since the beginning and patiently waited as it was written. Perfect ending-not where I originally saw it going either, but innovative none the less. Keep up the great work!

What a wonderful story! What incredible dynamics between the 2 protagonists! What a sweet ending! and more superlatives swirling in my mind. Thank you for a most wonderful story.

Wonderful story. Just in case you are wondering. Love weddings and babiestoo so feel free with an epilogue of this new little family. A little Daniel would proably be a riot!!!

I know I'm being ridiculous but I would read 100 chapters about these characters. This was a fantastic ending and I'm so sad it's ending. You'll just have to write another story for us to get addicted to :)

...for a heartwarming, feel-good, yet exciting and spicy story. Keep up your writing, FK...I agreed with DK...I think your work is worthy of publication!

An absolutely perfect conclusion to what has been an absorbing tale. You spin one helluva yarn, FK!

Thank you firstkiss for a wonderful story! I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Really enjoyed the story.

I enjoyed your storey.

I will look forward to your next effort.

You write very well.

Wonderful and so much like real life - and with great passion. Thanks for one of the very best stories - ever. A keeper.

You get better and better all the time.

. . . that I didn't discover this wonderful story until after you'd written all the chapters. It would have driven me crazy waiting for each new one to come along. The story was interesting, the characters were realistic, and the author is undoubtedly one of the best on Lit. Thank you, Firstkiss, for a terrific read.

I wish there was something higher than 100 to let you know how amazing your story is. I'm sure you know, as I'm sure you've read all the readers' comments. You are a talented writer, and I love your work- all of it. I have waited for the final chapter, and it was wonderful. Thank you!

After reading this my pussy was so wet that I had to reach for the nearest thing and penetrate. Thank you so much for giving my first O and I hope that you and I have many more.

Love PJ

I really enjoyed it all. I enjoyed the little asides like drinking mugs of Earl Grey tea. I enjoyed the battle of wills and the ultimate surrender of both. Really great.

So sad to see this story end but loved every part of it.

This should - and easily could - have been just a sappy love story, but despite the cliché-like storyline it's fantastic. You write well, the dialogue is believable yet more perfect than real life. Congratulations on your story!

Hey First Kiss, I love the way you write. Though, you need to give us a normal girl, 36D? Most of us.....not so blessed. Daniel on the other hand is a perfect specimen of a man. I loved the story.......as far as erotica goes, you are my favorite writer ever!!!! Good luck with your writing, hope to see a hard cover with your name some time soon!

I can't believe I was skimming over the sex scenes to get to the story. Good story, very good characters. I still have a lot of your stuff to read, I’m looking forward to it.

....for this story to be so damn good!! The more I read you stuff the more I fall in love with your characters and your writing style. I would not be surprised if you published a book one day...you have that much potential. Thanks for the good times and looking forward to many more!!

I've recently discovered your work, and this is one amazing piece of fiction, not to mention erotica! The sex scenes are hot, but more importantly (for me anyway), the story rocks! It's not easy to write an inter-office romance; there are so many issues involved (especially this one wherein the hero is her boss), but you handled it beautifully. Oh, and next time, could you write something about more 'ordinary' looking guys & gals, maybe write about someone with issues (socially inept, geeky, weight-related, insecure, trauma, PTSD, STD, etc.). I would love to see a good author tackle those sensitive issues. Thanks for sharing your talent, and I hope you continue to write more stories! Thanks for sharing your talent, and I hope you continue to write more stories!

One of the best stories i've read here. Love the banter line between the protagonists, and buildup. Glorious.

i would love it if you would do a follow up on the story

(and im sure all your other fans would too)

Kind of stumbled upon this story by accident...thank god! I couldn't even stop to comment on the chapters...I LOVED it...so very very much! Your a brilliant author and I completely was enthralled by this story. Now off to read another of your stories...

on this story just a short time ago and couldn't stop reading until I got to the end of the story! You HAVE to write a sequel to this. I want to know about the baby. About the company, and mostly about the people in this story!

Your writing is superb. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

This story left me a bit sad in that it stopped, period. It could have 5, 10, 20, 50 chapters and I would have read them all with relish! Having read everything this author has written and published here, I can honestly say, Firstkiss is one of the best writers on the site. She is an endearing, sensitive and wise story teller. So it is not just that the stories are wonderful but that she has so much talent and draws so powerfully on her own odyssey that it all gets infused into her work, and, I am afraid, masks the great challenge good writing is. It can lead us to believe these things can just be produced overnight. Well, they can't. I am honored to have read this author as I have few others here. I think that says something very important.

My sincere and heartfelt thanks for writing this and the rest of you work Firstkiss. We are lucky to have you.

so this was so sweet and perfect it made me cry!

Have you thought about getting this published in book form.

Excellent job! I love finding stories where you start caring about the characters and get to laugh and cry with them. You are a very good writer and I hope you continue.

i really love love and adore completely your work,u are an exellent writer.

maybe the best of all for me,plz keep going i would love to read more of your work.

WOW!!! I don't want to simply be a repeat of all the other comments left here and on the other chapters, but I just wanted to say that this was probably the best story I have EVER read! (And believe me, I read tons :P)

The humor was witty and absolutely fantastic ("when a man and a woman do what you and your daniel have been doing with what i am sure is alarming frequency..." ROFLMAO!!!) and I completely fell in love with all the characters.

Lastly, I thought I'd mention a weird thing that happened to me multiple times. At least once in every chapter (pretty much every time Daniel and Clara were having any sort of physical contact at all ;D) I'd get this weird tingly feeling in my whole entire body - especially my fingertips. Sometimes it was so intense that i couldn't even continue scrolling down the page!

I think that proves that this is a truly magnificent story, as I have NEVER had a story do this to me! Thanks so much! Now I'm off to read every one of your other stories.

ya what about suitcliff junior.......stubborn like daniel or sweet n bold like clara or just a beautiful combination........ok we readers can think about it

better u can just start a new one.........please....love ur creation...... never got better thing than this...others just write about sex which is boring n not attract me......u rock

Will be looking out for more of your work!

Boy, where do you find a guy like Daniel? I love your story. Love it! I love a man who knows what he wants, sure of himself, and in control of his life, well, all to a certain extent of course! There are so many great stories on this site but this one is definitely the story that is so good I keep coming back to read it again and again. I say Canadian gal knows how to do it right!

I was honestly sad that the story ended. It was without a doubt the best I've read on this site. I agree with the other comments, I could have read endless more chapters. Excellent, simply excellent. I read the entire story, then read it again... and I have it bookmarked. :) I loved it.

I am struggling to keep the tears in my eyes.

It is not often that I even find a published writer that keeps me riveted to the page and every word! I read it from the first to last just as Clara would sketch the foundation.

Long may you write!

Cheers!

This was the best I have read on Lit yet!

Absolutely lovely. One of the yummiest older men I've ever read.

This story was amazing, I absolutely loved it! Daniel and Clara are such wonderful characters, I just wish the story could go on and on and on, I could read it forever. I actually cried at the end. Thank you for such a wonderful story. :)

Thank you for writing this wonderful story! What I appreciate most is that this story was written by a young woman, and consequently that it provided some insight into how a young woman thinks about men, love, sex, and all of life. I am somewhat intimidated by what you consider to be the ideal man, with his nearly absolute self-confidence and take-charge attitude about everything: 99% of real-world men do not, and cannot, even approach this ideal. On the other hand, female characters written by the typical male author of erotica are no less idealized, and with characteristics very few real-world women already possess or could ever develop So what you have written is perfectly fair, and I have greatly enjoyed your providing the opportunity for me to experience your thoughts and fantasies. I hope you will continue to write stories for Literotica!

I honestly believe your brilliant, and that you should never stop, especially if you love it. I dont take the time often to write comments, but I think your writing deserved it. :) So please be happy, be blessed!

Thanks for sharing !

this story is absolutely genius! im an architect myself and i admire your deep research and the way you write!

great story i enjoyed every line of it

thank you

I loved this. It was realistic, it had passion, tension without being too much, a detailed and interesting plot that I could care about--you're pretty fantastic.

In fact, I was so bewitched by the words that I didn't notice any spelling errors, so I'm going to go ahead and say that you're a fantastic editor as well.

Can't wait to read your other stories. I wish you a long and fruitful literary career!

I have bookmarked you and know I will be back to read and re-read your works.

This is awesome man, i mean wow..

a great story -- all ten chapters. i hope you write many many more to entertain your many fans, of which i am but one.

OMG! This story was so incredible! I seriously could scream with how amazing it made me feel and these characters! AH! Sooo unbelievably good! Oh! I LOVE IT!!!

I mean this in all seriousness. You're a fantastic writer, your characters have depth and passion, and above all, they are BELIEVABLE - which is surprisingly hard to come by in erotica and romance novels. I found this story just as I was starting to think about dinner, and it's kept me riveted even to the point of ignoring my growling stomach. I just had to know what would happen next!

The sex scenes were, well, something I wish I could experience. And I loved the way she was his equal but also sometimes submissive to him. The balance they were finding in their relationship was endearing and made them both somehow more likable.

Again, I think you should consider going for a novel-length story with this plot or something entirely fresh to you, and seeing what an agent thinks about it. You have the talent, and I know I'd buy your books!

Warning: No cocks were sucked during the writing of this series!

You have excellent writing technique, great timing, you can flesh out a character in a few measly words ... but a woman that's so deep in lust with Daniel would have kissed IT. Is the author too shy? Grin! :)

Also, it's so formulaic I'm not sure I'm buying it as a personal fantasy, but I forgive it because it's brilliantly executed. 50 deserved stars from me. :)

Wow your story is touchingand a love story that makes me begin to believe in love again..the story is damn sexy too~~ thanks!!

Thank you so much for this series. I love your writing! The imagery and emotions flow together so well with the character development. I love it! If you are not a professional writer, you should be! I could totally imagine a PG - 13 version of your stories for the big screen. Thanks!

didn't read this series because I'm not usually into the "Mature" stories...but damn, I'm glad I did. It was amazing.

I have to say that this has been one of the best I have read on Lit. You made the characters come to life, I had to read the whole thing in one sitting. All I can say is thank you, for the amazing writing. Please keep it up!!!!

I absolutely LOVED this story! The hero was initially an asshole but I grew to love him at the end. A great story from beginning to end. Thank you.

Great story!! One of the best I have read on Lit. Please keep writing.

So this is my 2nd, 3rd, ok maybe about my 5th time reading this story and I can't get enough!!! Fantastic writing, you go on with your bad self lol

don't worry about that... its my 15th time....or maybe 16?

Thank you for taking a miserable day and turning it around. I think I'll save your other stories for my next grey day. Been alot of them lately.

From Montreal with love

You forgot to tell us to get a LARGE box of Kleenex when reading this! What a pleasure it was to read such excellence - and, despite the stiff upper lip AND the weight of my old school tie, I couldn't get to the end without a very large lump in my throat!

Unquestionably among the top 5 I've read on here, and arguably number one. Many, many thanks.

I love this story!

This was darn near a perfect story. I loved the characters, the plot, the sexual heat and the romance. In fact the only thing I found wrong, other than the occasional typo was the jeep; the first time he drivers her jeep it had a sticky clutch and later when she drove it she put it in park. Seriously, if the only thing wrong in a story is it's miraculous change from a standard to an automatic then it is one well written story. Thank you for sharing it.

This was the perfect ending to a phenomenal story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, from start to finish.

What a bloody good read, I really enjoyed your writing. more power to your pen.

I have enjoyed all of your writings and sincerley hope you continue to write.

It is apparent that you enjoy it as much as we do so as Larry the Cable Guy says:

GIT ER DONE!

i loved this story, every chapter!

love every bit of it! i didn't stop reading from beginning till the end.. :)

FirstKiss, I don't know whether you still check your comments, but I'm writing my first ever Lit comment just in case. Your well-drawn characters have a wonderful depth that is illuminated in a subtle, understated style. I've spent hours this weekend reading your postings on Lit. It's been a pleasure and I hope you continue to have room in your life for your writing.

Best wishes,

Kym

I couldn't stop reading once I started! Fierce passion and fierce antagonism, perfect combo. Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for putting pen to paper [:-)} and sharing this beautiful love story. I would have commented earlier, but you had me for page 1 of chapter 1. It was everything you could ask you in a romance and I other than stopping to vote I just kept reading. Once again, thank you.

I just finished the series and I loved it! Every story kept me interested and the ending is perfect. Daniel and Clara are such wonderfully written characters. You are seriously a gifted writer. Don't stop writing!

That really was a beautiful ending. It seems that some author's really screw over their story with an anticlimactic ending that is so rushed and ridiculous it ruins the whole story, but this ending...well...it was just perfect. It only took me a couple hours to read, but this story truly is one of the best I've read. Honestly, this should have been under romance, but that's just my opinion.

WITHOUT QUESTION, this is the MOST amazing story I've read on literotica. I love the fact that it was a well written and conceived story, with or without the sexual content. And that it could stand alone without it.

Many of the stories I've read on this site seem to be: person meets other person, sex, person moves to new location, sex, meaningless conversation, sex, cheesy "climactic event", sex....

Not so here!

You are a brilliant writer... I hope you continue!!!

Wishing you continues success,

From a ravenous reader of all types of literature, and a merciless critic at times. :)

I loved this series and I truly wish it would never end!! This is one of the best literotica stories I've read!!!

I enjoy your writing. I'm just an old softy. THANKS, B

Hi Firstkiss, really enjoyed the story. Read all ten chapters in one go. Thanks, Larry UK.

Great story. Couldn't put it down and read it a in one go and now it's 2am, I'm blaming u when I fall asleep at working today

One of the very best :-)

No other stories have been near this good. Great mix of sex and everyday life struggles!

Thank you for the fine story. I hope I am my wifes Daniel.

I just loved this story, thankyou for writing it

Bravo ! Bravo ! This was one of those series that was a true joy to follow , I am just sorry the end had to come . Bravo !

A Thoroughly enjoyable and pleasant read. Sadly it had to come to an end but it was lovely.

I loved that story, for its truth and reality.

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story and then to share it with the rest of us!

LTG