All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 20'

firstt commenntt =P lol omg its getting soo good your absolutely amazing with nonhuman stories i hope you write more of em after your done this one ugh i want away with jenna i hate hows she sneaking around in the background and theres hardly anything showing whats going on with her.....BUT i must admitt it is building the suspense.. and omg i love the idea of cullens chic having a liter thats so sweet .... sometimes i wish we had a but of animal in us lol srry if i sound delusional <3 Mercedes

Thanks!

OMG...I love the development of your characters. I hate Jenna and can't wait to see what she does next. Love it. More Please.

I've enjoyed every story. I check daily for another one. Can't wait for Jenna to get hers. Also Terrick, probably spelled wrong. Of course we need the villians too. Looking forward to more stories from you. Happy holidays.

The characters are perfect, your descriptions are vivid and full of life, the sex is hot and very well done. This should be a novel.

Ok, there is no way that you are a first-time writer. Your story is to great for that to happen.

So, any chance you are going to post other stuff?

I am really enjoying the way this story is unfolding. With each new chapter, we get a little bit more information. This time, Aislinn seeks out Brinah and we learn a little bit more about druids, and we see that Aislinn is also a fast learner as she reminds herself to be careful who she is thinking of when she enters the circle.<br><br>

Wow, how often will she go into heat? Once a year? That was intense! Great story and I'm looking forward to more :)

Best story I've read on this board! They are hott, passionate and wild. The story has a geat plot. You really outdid yourself with this one.

how have they managed to hide the original bite mark he made? Keith found them out by the circle, and he knew about it, but they decided to hide it.

This story is amazing. I cant get enough of these two. I wish my computer would let me know when a new one comes up so I an quit checking all week! Thanks for the story...keep it up!

LOVE IT, KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE bring us more!! I LOVE THIS STORY!

I love all your stories.. But this is the Best you'v ever written I think .. Well maybe you should just add some action to Cullen - Aislin relationship ha ?? Some ex blond girlfriend from the past ... Or some guy from Aislins past ? I dunno some jeaolsy would do good for this story .. Take careee. And post sooon

I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. Im getting all excited, lol. I have loved every single minutes i spent reading this story :)

OHHH please hurrry!! lol I need to know what happens next!

Hey...so you said in one of the earlier chapters that Keith had a daughter...but didn't you just say that this would be Jays fist litter? WTF? what happened?

I'm still very much hooked! So enjoying this journey - really, with or without the sex this story was so totally worth reading!

LOL but the sex makes it that much better, spicier - hot!

I've been complaining about NOT ENOUGH SEX!...complaining about sex between dog and cat...complaining NOT enough HOT sex. You have me now. This chapter was FANTASTIC! Keith is so in the hell funny! Then there is the sex....oh GOD! Keep up the humor AND the description of HOT SEX! okay...did I mention this chapter was GREAT? And SO WAS THE SEX!!!! So what it's a dog and cat?! I can see it...sorta..

hay grat book plz keep writing more would love to see a new story by you

Grat work makes me want to try my hand at wrighting

Awesome story!!!!

Half of the time she is getting mad at the smallest things and then the next moment everything is fine again. I don't really like her character and I believe that Aislinn should be the Alpha. Beyond that, I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far and look forward to reading the remaining chapters. I do hate that Keith mentioned something about possiby sleeping with an Omega. If he is mated to Jay then he should not be able to sleep around.