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by Xantu

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Invisible2uInvisible2uover 16 years ago
Believe it or not...

...I'm sure there are very many who can relate to this, including me. Nice read, Xantu!

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERover 16 years ago
Typical guy not understanding...

Interesting look at a typical guy not understanding the wants and needs of his own woman.

Maybe, next time she won't bother confessing her desires to him. Maybe, next time she'll look for another to take his place.

I shall look forward to your next chapter.

"Hold on a second, there's someone at my door."

"Oh, hi, Ayva."

I gotta go.

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