All Comments on 'The Four Horsemen Ch. 02'

Loved Chapter 2. I can see where your going with chapter 1 and chapter 2, but chapter 2 could stand alone. I liked the descriptiveness of chapter 2. Chapter 1 was very vague. I can't wait to see Chapter 3... I think you need something to tie it all together. I will be looking forward to the rest of the story!