by oldhippie1949
I found your story to be very touching, as well as erotic. It made for a beautiful story of people healing each other. thank your for sharing
And well worth maximum points,Lesbians are lovely,cant say the same for gay men.Heterosexual male
Good story well told. I belive that if we live long enough then tragedy will play its part. . It was great that you had two such caring friends to get you through.
score them--The dowbgrade here is for the asshole play. The rest was very nice
This was a most original story and very well told. I found myself brought into a tantric and delightful state of mind by your characters. I would love to know how Ray and Gail fare, and perhaps if they meet up again.
wow that story was amazing, so perfect, it truly does hit you in the right spots!!!
A Good story, with some sad content, but without any childish stereotypes.
Your writing is so sensitive. Nice to see in a man's writing. Very nice.