by ABSTRUSE
It's not easy to properly capture a moment with words. In all its senses. But you do here. I can even smell it. You have a beautifully delicate way with words, Abs, and I enjoy that immensely. Thank you for sharing.
did you sneak not one, but TWO poems past me? Obviously, we're having communications issues.
Very lovely and romantic poem. It reminds me a little of what Elizabeth Barrett Browning wrote. A little. ;) Good job.
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This really remains one of my favorite poems. It's been years since I first discovered it. From beginning to end, it's simplistic beauty is enthralling. Well done.