It thought this was a moving story. You handled it well. You gave enough to the reader and left enough for the reader to fill in to make the story their own. Well Done. Michael
Really liked your story, lots of honest feelings, hopefully she is commited to her husband and doesn't look back. Thanks!
This does answer serveral questions. why do we marry? For love? sometimes. for stablilty sometimes.to be loved? quite often, to forget? sometimes. for money? again sometimes. But most of all companionship or a partnership anything is better than being alone.
made me cry
Deeply woven with great feelings and lifelike flow>
You should be proud - and you are looked forward to.
With Very High Regard
I had a meeting much like this one, recently...and you captured the bittersweetness so well. I hope that the sweet outweighs the bitter.
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