All Comments on 'Beast of Rage Ch. 02'
by Rhiannon_Nyx
- 7 Comments
Daniellekittenalmost 16 years agoyou should find one tense you like writing in and stick to it. The jumping back and forth is a bit jarring.
4u2_nvalmost 16 years agogreat, and getting better. i think the first chapter was smoother, in both the tenses and activity, but its enthralling. I'm looking forward to chapter 3, i just hope it won't be months before we see it...
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoplease come back again soon and add more LOTS more chapters would love to see where you go with this.. great story so far..
Anonymousover 15 years agoI think he's possessive and she's complex, very good characters to build on, I wanna know where you're going with it, why he's so captivated by her and needed to capture her. How does he gain her forgiveness. plz write another chapter!
Caseybearalmost 14 years agois there going to be anymore? Really started to get into the characters
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