All Comments on 'Life's Hard Lessons'

good job hope there a conclusion..

keep it going!

Good start for a sick story. It is obvious though that Charlie's "dad" is in fact, not his real father. That being said he is not doing his mom, or his aunt, or his sister when it comes to that. I am sure papa will end up dead or worse, so that aspect of good vs evil will be satisfied.

Well written with only a few grammatical and spelling errors. All in all, if you like non consent, this has all the makings of a good one. I would rate it higher than 75 if they had it, just not 100, yet.

FINISH IT

Fantastic writing. Messed up topic but well done none the less. Finish it my friend. Its great. Maybe sumit the second chapter for the Valentine's Day contest if they have one this year. good luck.

if the father's story is true about being framed by the women.

Good Read.