by Lady_Guenivere
Well done. Wasn't sure whether to feel happy or sad at the end. You left it wide open to interpretation.
this poem to really suck. In fact I kind of dreaded having to read it. But then I did and its actually quite good. I liked it. It is the best poem you have ever written (that I have read). It had great imagery and a slight ambiguity to it. Well done.
I really liked this poem. The simplicity is beautiful and makes me wish my life were more like it.