All Comments on 'Butterfingerz'

Wheres the NC? Not really any reluclance either... if this was in another catagory(first times maybe) I would have given it 100% due to the fact that it was a coming of age, first love/lust story and was well written, but since it wasn't, and I had to choose between 75% & 100% I had to go with the 75.

Great first post, Cherry! And I kinda like the fact that you didn't use quotations...made it more unique. Wondering if there will be a follow-up??

This story, like another poster pointed out, has been entered into the wrong category. That being said, the writing was good and I thoroughly enjoyed it. However, I would suggest that you use quotations and actually turn your descriptives into dialogue.

You should keep going with this one

I'm completely in love with this story. I really wish there was a sequel. And the ending! Oh my goodness what he whispered to her was incredible, (...do you still taste like the ocean). And i believe that you did place this story in the right category. Obviously, although she was lusting after him, when it came to actual getting serious she was reluctant or shied away. For instance, the shower scene and when he said "round 2?", to perfect chance for them to engage in sex but instead she went to her room. Thats what i love about this story. The girl is so into the idea of having sex with this hot guy, but when it comes down to it she shies away as if she knows that its something she's not truly prepared for. Her reluctance to fully give herself to this older guy is charming. Amazing job, Cherry. I couldn't get this story out of my head all day.

thank you very much for the thoughtful, detailed and useful feedback. i have always considered this a reluctance story, so it is good to know there are others who feel the same. so glad you enjoyed it. i'm working on finishing another story but will definitely keep in mind your request. xxoo