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Do Not Ejaculate For 24 Hours!

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by Anonymous

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by tungtied2u12/14/08

What a gem !

This is a great story, told at a perfect pace. You really captured the mood of the moment extremely well.
It would appear You manipulate words as well as You manipulated Your husband--lucky us and lucky him !

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by galahadesq12/14/08

Yes, you are a bad girl

Great story! You certainly know how to describe a blowjob....

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by mortis12/14/08

What a great story as susal Selena you are the bes

I was throbbing along with him reading your story.

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by Abdulbenthere12/18/08

A suggestion for another story

I'd like to suggest another story:
If your female protagonist AGREED with the donation and wanted to help him raise his sperm count she could be the World's Best Cock Teaser.

Example: He's in bed naked reading a book. She enters in an outfit that would make a victoria'ssecret designer blush.
Gives him good night peck on the cheek then turns to his testicles, kisses each one and says "Sleep tight little spermies! You've got a busy day tommorrow." She crosses her legs & turns her back.

Just immagine what she can do in the porno room with him.

Abdulbenthere

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by AceStroker02/15/09

So Naughty, So Erotic

As usual, so well written, with great pace. And you have such a knack for making the naughty observations. I love this line: "or fingering myself tomorrow while you're at your appointment and imagining you jerking off..."

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by Anonymous09/15/09

Unexpected side effect?

While the female lead of this story was meant to seem naughty, and while your depiction was successful, the playfulness with her partner also came across as endearing and cute. It added to what the characters shared. Good job.

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by NOmeth1710/17/11

nice

That's a nice one.

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by Series 602/21/12

You are a wicked, wicked girl

But it was such a great story.

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