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by redgryphon

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TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69over 15 years ago
been there.

We have all just about been there and at one time or another we wished we could go back in time and relive those moments of youth. Great short story and looking for more from you.!! Thanks.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Really liked it

She was lucky to have someone that took care of her needs first.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
oh, so nicely done

you wrote that one just right, it was like what was happening to her was happening to me.... please keep the stories coming...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Crap

Total Rubbish

HayboysHayboysabout 2 years ago

This is a story so simple in it’s telling and simplicity it mimics the innocents of the story’s main character and in doing so makes it so endearing that you feel you are actually living the scene as if you were actually there as this scene unfolded it reminds of the primitive paintings of artists . This is such a simple story and told in such a simple form that it is Brilliant very well written story Bravo to the Author

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