by Samuelx
Please quit polluting the site with your writing - it would be one thing if your stories were "just" bad. Your stories give a new definition to the word putrid. Stop. Please.
Same old Bull Shit with each of your so-called stories! Cut and Paste / Copied Stories with name changes! You (Samuelx), PrincessErin, and BostonFictionWriter have totally dominated and ruined Literotica.com in 2008!
The breaking in process you write about actually happens every day in American prisons, except it's white men who are anally raped and "broken" by gangs of black men.
As for some criticism, it doesn't make any sense for the narrator of the story to keep on calling them "black" men and women once she finds herself in this modern "Confederate America". She would surely call them "negroes".
If you want to do away with political correctness, then do away with it, man. Don't dilly dally around it like some nonce circling a playground.