by cherryontop1973
Please continue with this story, I can hardly wait to read more.
The bi-racial F/WM coupling is interesting, and well-written. Try to find an editor for the next installment. This was rushed and could have been longer. Take the time for character development. How old are they? What is the narrator's name? What color is her hair? etc.
even tho I gave this a 100, I HATE these tease stories, please disclose that at the begining if your going to do it!
I really hope you plan on continuing their story. You did an excellent job of creating believable and likeable characters. The sexual tension between them was great. More...soon.
Soooo sexy, please add t sptoryww, cannot wait to read what happens next.
Great Story. Please continue, I would like to see what ultimately happens between these two.
Are you going to continue this? You left it open and I want more
i am actually working on this story now, with every intention of continuing it and posting updates very soon. thanks so much for the encouragement, after all this time.
What are friends for indeed. My gawd, dat taxi groping was hoooot
But, that might have been an intentional misdirection by the author.