All Comments on 'Red vs Wolfe Ch. 07'

by Little_Miss_J

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love it

Is Draiden going to end up a goodie and with Jeannie? Not that I presume to tell you how to write your story, but that would be great! I'm really enjoying this story. Estelle

Sirens_CrySirens_Cryabout 15 years ago
Welcome back!

We missed you! Thanks for the new edition. Cant wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Try reading it aloud...

I enjoyed the story, but you need to edit your work more carefully. Try reading it out loud and you will be able to catch the spots where the word that is written is not the one that should obviously be there.

bad_girl69bad_girl69about 15 years ago
yes!!

i am so excited that you wrote another chapter :) I have been waiting for a long time for this.lol. You did a god job at it, yes some editing is needed, but i easily ignored that, and just enjoyed the great story you have written:)

Please, i hope you are writing the next chapter already. Dont keeo us waiting! haha

ThaliaMarie24ThaliaMarie24about 15 years ago
Editor!!!!

I have loved every chapter, but the spelling and grammar mistakes are becoming a hassle to read through. For me a comma is what comes in certain sentences, not what one would be on after an accident (Comma= Punctuation, Coma= Medical condition). I love your story but I truly wish you would find an editor...Please! :-)

~T

Dragonangel5555Dragonangel5555about 15 years ago
Awesome!

more chappies please! I just love this story and i what to know what will happen next. you rock with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Any more chapters?

Will there be any more chapters coming? Loved them all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
ThaliaMarie24

ThaliaMarie24, if you are so concerned about spelling and grammer you should have a look at your own, a coma is something you can be in, to be on it is impossible. By the way, love the story.

RainezDemisexDRainezDemisexDover 14 years ago
ohh yay its getting good

i love the twists and turns. keep up the good work. its amazing. <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Love it!!

Soo loving the story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I wonder...

If Jeannie is Conner/Draiden's mate... Great story so far.

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