by Little_Miss_J
Is Draiden going to end up a goodie and with Jeannie? Not that I presume to tell you how to write your story, but that would be great! I'm really enjoying this story. Estelle
We missed you! Thanks for the new edition. Cant wait for more!
I enjoyed the story, but you need to edit your work more carefully. Try reading it out loud and you will be able to catch the spots where the word that is written is not the one that should obviously be there.
i am so excited that you wrote another chapter :) I have been waiting for a long time for this.lol. You did a god job at it, yes some editing is needed, but i easily ignored that, and just enjoyed the great story you have written:)
Please, i hope you are writing the next chapter already. Dont keeo us waiting! haha
I have loved every chapter, but the spelling and grammar mistakes are becoming a hassle to read through. For me a comma is what comes in certain sentences, not what one would be on after an accident (Comma= Punctuation, Coma= Medical condition). I love your story but I truly wish you would find an editor...Please! :-)
~T
more chappies please! I just love this story and i what to know what will happen next. you rock with this story.
ThaliaMarie24, if you are so concerned about spelling and grammer you should have a look at your own, a coma is something you can be in, to be on it is impossible. By the way, love the story.
i love the twists and turns. keep up the good work. its amazing. <3