All Comments  for

Birthday in the Mansion

byYoursSINSerely©
All
Comments (5)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous02/03/09

Interesting new take

Well, this is a different take on a Valentine Day story, using the Letter/Transcript category.

I enjoyed reading your story.

Good luck in the contest.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

I agree with the last commenter.

Very creatively done. Good job.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by shoeslayer01/16/10

Where's the sex?

Hello Yours SINserely,
Well you got me on this one!After i read a lesson on Greene
well part of it i was wonderin' where in hellz the sex?
Luckily along came Bill.... Literally!
So I am thinkin' any paragraph now she's gonna talk about the great time she had giving the birthday guy his bj. an it never happened.
A pretty good story though, it did leave a surprise at the end. Take care!
"R your heels safe from the "Shoeslayer?"

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by shoeslayer01/16/10

Where's the sex?

Hello Yours SINserely,
Well you got me on this one!After i read a lesson on Greene
well part of it i was wonderin' where in hellz the sex?
Luckily along came Bill.... Literally!
So I am thinkin' any paragraph now she's gonna talk about the great time she had giving the birthday guy his bj. an it never happened.
A pretty good story though, it did leave a surprise at the end. Take care!
"R your heels safe from the "Shoeslayer?"

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

So, I was wondering if you were writing about Rumson, NJ. Yup, HUUGE houses! Then, I saw your story about the new guy in your life. I'm thinking I am probably correct in that assumption? Former Jersey girl here :) Now I have to go read the sequel and see how the birthday gift goes. I love how conversational the letter is!

~Luna

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Birthday in the Mansion  or
More submissions by YoursSINSerely.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel